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<channel><title><![CDATA[Kristine Thornley - Blog]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog]]></link><description><![CDATA[Blog]]></description><pubDate>Wed, 10 Dec 2025 11:16:17 -0500</pubDate><generator>Weebly</generator><item><title><![CDATA[Intro to Medical Copy Editing: Medical Terminology]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/intro-to-medical-copy-editing-medical-terminology]]></link><comments><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/intro-to-medical-copy-editing-medical-terminology#comments]]></comments><pubDate>Mon, 02 Oct 2017 04:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category><![CDATA[Copy editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Good to know]]></category><category><![CDATA[Medical editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Terminology]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/intro-to-medical-copy-editing-medical-terminology</guid><description><![CDATA[©Kristine Thornley &#8203;Copy editing medical content requires a basic knowledge of medical terminology or the &ldquo;language of medicine.&rdquo; It is the medical copy editor&rsquo;s job to ensure that the right terms are used&nbsp;and that they are spelled correctly. There is a big difference between a colonoscopy and a colostomy&mdash;and you do not want to be the one to mix them up. You will be a more effective and efficient medical copy editor with a good foundation in medical terminolog [...] ]]></description><content:encoded><![CDATA[<span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:0px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:0px;*margin-top:0px'><a><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/logo-colour2_orig.png" style="margin-top: 5px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:0; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption">&copy;Kristine Thornley</span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">Copy editing medical content requires a basic knowledge of medical terminology or the &ldquo;language of medicine.&rdquo; It is the medical copy editor&rsquo;s job to ensure that the right terms are used&nbsp;and that they are spelled correctly. There is a big difference between a colonoscopy and a colostomy&mdash;and you do not want to be the one to mix them up. You will be a more effective and efficient medical copy editor with a good foundation in medical terminology.</span></div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>  <span class='imgPusher' style='float:left;height:40px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:left;max-width:100%;;clear:left;margin-top:20px;*margin-top:40px'><a><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/lungs-jpg_orig.jpg" style="margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 10px; border-width:0; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;"><strong>Body&rsquo;s Systems and Basic Physiology</strong><br />Understanding medical terminology starts with knowing the body&rsquo;s systems and the parts that comprise them (skeletal, muscular, integumentary, cardiovascular, lymphatic, respiratory, gastrointestinal, endocrine, nervous, urinary, and reproductive) as well as some basic physiology. If you do not have a biology background, the<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="https://www.khanacademy.org/science/health-and-medicine/human-anatomy-and-physiology"><u>Khan Academy</u></a> offers free online courses in human anatomy and physiology.<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.innerbody.com/"><u>InnerBody</u></a> is a free virtual human anatomy website that offers hundreds of interactive anatomy pictures and system descriptions. Or perhaps you would like to take a &ldquo;peek under the hood&rdquo; with<span>&nbsp;</span><em><a href="https://play.google.com/store/books/details?id=xJFRDgAAQBAJ&amp;source=productsearch&amp;utm_source=HA_Desktop_US&amp;utm_medium=SEM&amp;utm_campaign=PLA&amp;pcampaignid=MKTAD0930BO1&amp;gclid=EAIaIQobChMI69fuiYTS1gIVC25-Ch2DgA5TEAYYASABEgIjGPD_BwE&amp;gclsrc=aw.ds&amp;dclid=CIvuzOmG0tYCFUyPaQodOAcOhA"><u>Anatomy &amp; Physiology For Dummies</u></a></em>.</div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>  <span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:10px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:20px;*margin-top:40px'><a><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/psi-jpg_orig.jpg" style="margin-top: 5px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:0; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;">&#8203;<strong>Common Medical Terms and Medical Root Words</strong><br />You need to be familiar with common medical terms and medical root words. Most common medical terms used today are derived from Latin or Greek, which makes sense since the Greeks were the founders of modern medicine. Having some knowledge of the Latin and Greek bases of words will go a long way to understanding the word and ensuring that it is used correctly. For example, the Greek roots<span>&nbsp;</span><em>myo</em><span>&nbsp;</span>(muscle) and<span>&nbsp;</span><em>myelo</em><span>&nbsp;</span>(bone marrow) look similar but have very different meanings. I was fortunate to take a &ldquo;Latin and Greek for Scientists&rdquo; course in undergrad, but I suspect that many of you with a natural love for language will already have some knowledge in this area. As a starting point, here is a<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_medical_roots,_suffixes_and_prefixes"><u>list of medical roots, suffixes, and prefixes</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>with their meanings and etymology. For medical terms, the<span>&nbsp;</span><em><a href="http://www.merckmanuals.com/"><u>Merck Manual of Diagnosis and Therapy</u></a></em><span>&nbsp;</span>is the most widely used comprehensive medical textbook for both professionals and consumers (available in print, online, and as an app). The<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.amwa.org/"><u>American Medical Writers Association</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>also offers a self-study workbook on Elements of Medical Terminology that is designed primarily for those with little or no medical background. You do not have to be a member to purchase it.</div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>  <span class='imgPusher' style='float:left;height:35px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:left;max-width:100%;;clear:left;margin-top:20px;*margin-top:40px'><a><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/spellcheck-jpg_orig.jpg" style="margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 10px; border-width:0; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;"><strong>Correct Spelling and Common Errors</strong><br />The field of medicine is filled with ridiculously complicated terms, such as<span>&nbsp;</span><em>sphenopalatine ganglioneuralgia</em><span>&nbsp;</span>(&ldquo;ice cream headache&rdquo;) and unusual spellings (eg, hemorrhoid, diphtheria). You are definitely going to need a medical dictionary.<span>&nbsp;</span><em><a href="http://www.stedmansonline.com/"><u>Stedman&rsquo;s Medical Dictionary</u></a></em><span>&nbsp;</span>is the authoritative spelling resource for more than 54,000 medical terms and it is available in print, online, and as an app. Stedman&rsquo;s also offers a<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="https://shop.lww.com/Stedman-s-Plus-2017-Medical-Pharmaceutical-Spellchecker--Standard-/p/9781496354334"><u>medical/pharmaceutical spellchecker</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>that is compatible with many word processing systems. Windows users also receive a universal spellchecker that integrates medical and pharmaceutical spellchecking throughout the entire desktop, not just in Word. This is an invaluable tool for medical copy editors.<br />&#8203;<br />I will discuss abbreviations and word usage in medical writing in future posts. Until then, happy adventures in editing!</div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Copy Editing vs. Proofreading: What is the Difference?]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/copy-editing-vs-proofreading-what-is-the-difference]]></link><comments><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/copy-editing-vs-proofreading-what-is-the-difference#comments]]></comments><pubDate>Tue, 05 Sep 2017 04:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category><![CDATA[Copy editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Good to know]]></category><category><![CDATA[Proofreading]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/copy-editing-vs-proofreading-what-is-the-difference</guid><description><![CDATA[&#8203;&ldquo;If publishing were like getting dressed in the morning, the copyeditor would review the chosen outfit, bearing in mind the weather and what the day&rsquo;s agenda entails. She may decide on different shoes or a wider belt. She may pick out a different jacket. She may even suggest an entire wardrobe change. She examines the overall appearance and makes suggestions to create the nicest-looking ensemble that ever stood in front of the bedroom mirror. The proofreader then waltzes in an [...] ]]></description><content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><font size="4">&ldquo;If publishing were like getting dressed in the morning, the copyeditor would review the chosen outfit, bearing in mind the weather and what the day&rsquo;s agenda entails. She may decide on different shoes or a wider belt. She may pick out a different jacket. She may even suggest an entire wardrobe change. She examines the overall appearance and makes suggestions to create the nicest-looking ensemble that ever stood in front of the bedroom mirror. The proofreader then waltzes in and points out the deodorant marks on the shirt.&rdquo; (Suzanne Gilad, <em>Copyediting &amp; Proofreading for Dummies</em>)</font></span></blockquote>  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">Many authors who contact me think that proofreading is synonymous with copy editing (and sometimes copy editing is synonymous with copy writing, but that&rsquo;s a different story). But copy editing and proofreading are two different processes done at two different stages of production. When I explain to an author who is clearly looking for copy editing that proofreading is actually the final step after typesetting and layout, I still have many who say that is what they need because they have already put their manuscript in final publishing format&mdash;without having copy edited the text first. Editors can understand how eager authors are to see their manuscript &ldquo;look&rdquo; like a book, but there are stages that should be followed so that you do not end up wasting valuable time and money.<br /><br />According to the<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.editors.ca/publications/professional-editorial-standards"><u>Professional Editorial Standards</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>of Editors Canada, copy editing is defined as &ldquo;editing to ensure correctness, accuracy, consistency, and completeness,&rdquo; whereas proofreading is &ldquo;examining material after layout or in its final format to correct errors in textual and visual elements.&rdquo;<br />&#8203;<br /><strong>Science or Art?</strong><br />Regarding the text, it has been said that proofreading is a science, editing is an art. Proofreading is correcting text. Copy editing is not just correcting, it is also improving. Let&rsquo;s take a look at the following example:</div>  <div id="454032151475750124"><div><style type="text/css">	#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table-wrapper {  padding: 20px 0;}#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table {  width: 100%;  border: 1px solid #C9CDCF;  border-spacing: 0;}#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table td.cell {  border-right: 1px solid #C9CDCF;  border-bottom: 1px solid #C9CDCF;  word-break: break-word;  background-color: #FFFFFF;  width: 50%;}#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table td.cell .paragraph {  width: 90%;  margin: 0 5%;  padding-bottom: 10px;  padding-top: 10px;  text-align: left;}#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table.style-top tr:first-child td,#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table.style-side td:first-of-type {  background-color: #f7b733;}#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table.style-top tr:first-child td .paragraph,#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table.style-side td:first-of-type .paragraph {  font-weight: 700;}#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table tr:last-child td {  border-bottom: none;}#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table td:last-of-type {  border-right: none;}#element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd .simple-table .empty-content-area-element {  padding-left: 0px !important;}</style><div id="element-c2ba2e84-ec46-40d0-90bb-beb1528f9fbd" data-platform-element-id="702688850553606843-1.4.3" class="platform-element-contents">	<div class="simple-table-wrapper">  <table class="simple-table style-side">      <tr>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">Original sentence:</div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;"><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">I would like to take the oportunity to think you for agreing to met with me on Monday, May 21</span>st<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">.</span><br /></div></td>      </tr>      <tr>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;"><strong>Proofread correction:</strong></div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;"><br />I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for agreeing to meet with me on Monday, May 21.</div></td>      </tr>      <tr>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">Copy-edited correction:</div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;"><br>Thank you for agreeing to meet with me on Monday, May 21.<br /></div></td>      </tr>  </table></div></div><div style="clear:both;"></div></div></div>  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">Notice the difference. In the proofread correction, the text remained the same, but the spelling and number errors were fixed. In the copy edited correction, the wordiness of the sentence was corrected. This change in wording makes it a &ldquo;stronger&rdquo; sentence. The proofreader would not change the wording. As long as it is understandable, the proofreader would leave it as it is and fix the copy editing and layout errors only.<br />&#8203;<br /><strong>When, Where, and How</strong><br />Copy editing and proofreading differ in when, where, and how they are done. The copy editor works on the manuscript before layout, usually on-screen in a Word document. This is a much easier time and location to copy edit. The copy editor can adjust the font size and line spacing of the document for easier reading without worrying about messing up the layout. The copy editor also has access to lots of built-in Word functions as well as<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="https://kristinethornley.wordpress.com/2014/07/09/getting-word-to-work-for-you-tools-for-editing-in-word/"><u>add-in Word tools</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>and macros to help in the process. The proofreader, on the other hand, works on proofs of the final manuscript after layout, usually within a PDF or on a hard copy (printed out version). Space to work is far more limited in this format and the proofreader reviews things that the copy editor never sees, such as all the style and visual elements, cross-references and running heads, typography and page formatting.</div>  <div class="paragraph"><strong>Copy editing (manuscript in a Word document)</strong></div>  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0;margin-right:0;text-align:center"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/copy-edit-text_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>  <div class="paragraph"><strong>Proofreading (PDF proof of page spread)</strong></div>  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0;margin-right:0;text-align:center"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/page-spread_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">How are corrections marked? When copy editing a Word document,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><a href="https://support.office.com/en-us/article/Track-changes-in-Word-197ba630-0f5f-4a8e-9a77-3712475e806a"><u>track changes</u></a><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>is used to mark errors and changes to the text. Errors and text changes are marked directly within the body of the text. Comments are usually made within the margins. In proofreading, however, changes have to be indicated in two places: within the body of the text using standard symbols and a corresponding symbol or note/query in the margin on the same line so that the error can be easily spotted. A summary of the differences is presented below:</span></div>  <div id="944002911287357388"><div><style type="text/css">	#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table-wrapper {  padding: 20px 0;}#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table {  width: 100%;  border: 1px solid #C9CDCF;  border-spacing: 0;}#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table td.cell {  border-right: 1px solid #C9CDCF;  border-bottom: 1px solid #C9CDCF;  word-break: break-word;  background-color: #FFFFFF;  width: 50%;}#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table td.cell .paragraph {  width: 90%;  margin: 0 5%;  padding-bottom: 10px;  padding-top: 10px;  text-align: left;}#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table.style-top tr:first-child td,#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table.style-side td:first-of-type {  background-color: #f7b733;}#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table.style-top tr:first-child td .paragraph,#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table.style-side td:first-of-type .paragraph {  font-weight: 700;}#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table tr:last-child td {  border-bottom: none;}#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table td:last-of-type {  border-right: none;}#element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696 .simple-table .empty-content-area-element {  padding-left: 0px !important;}</style><div id="element-7bdf4002-e45f-4005-8985-ccb3dc624696" data-platform-element-id="702688850553606843-1.4.3" class="platform-element-contents">	<div class="simple-table-wrapper">  <table class="simple-table style-top">      <tr>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:center;"><strong>Copy Editing</strong></div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:center;"><strong>Proofreading</strong></div></td>      </tr>      <tr>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph"><ul><li>Changing copy for clarity and readability</li><li>Works on manuscript before layout (usually Word)</li><li>Markup in-line only (comments in margin)</li><li>Does not even see layout</li></ul></div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph"><ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>Correcting copy</li><li>Works on proofs after layout (usually hard copy or PDF)</li><li>Markup both in-line and in margin</li><li>Responsible for checking layout</li><li>Identifies copy editing errors</li></ul></div></td>      </tr>  </table></div></div><div style="clear:both;"></div></div></div>  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">What other differences are there between copy editing and proofreading? Share them with us.<br /><br />Happy Adventures in Editing!</div>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Cite This: Print and Electronic Journal Articles]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/cite-this-print-and-electronic-journal-articles]]></link><comments><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/cite-this-print-and-electronic-journal-articles#comments]]></comments><pubDate>Mon, 01 Dec 2014 05:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category><![CDATA[Citations]]></category><category><![CDATA[Editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Journal Articles]]></category><category><![CDATA[Medical editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[References]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/cite-this-print-and-electronic-journal-articles</guid><description><![CDATA[References often do not get the attention that these important manuscript elements deserve. Scientific and medical journal articles use references to support the authors&rsquo; hypotheses, to credit or acknowledge the work of others, and to direct the reader to additional information or resources. The role of the copy editor is to ensure that all references listed are actually cited within the paper, are complete and accurate, and are presented in the correct format and style used by the journal [...] ]]></description><content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">References often do not get the attention that these important manuscript elements deserve. Scientific and medical journal articles use references to support the authors&rsquo; hypotheses, to credit or acknowledge the work of others, and to direct the reader to additional information or resources. The role of the copy editor is to ensure that all references listed are actually cited within the paper, are complete and accurate, and are presented in the correct format and style used by the journal. Frankly, it can be pretty tedious. But, before we explore some time-saving tips, let&rsquo;s review the basics.<br /><strong>Print Journal Articles</strong><br />As per the<span>&nbsp;</span><em><a href="http://www.amamanualofstyle.com/" target="_blank"><u>AMA Manual of Style</u></a></em><span>&nbsp;</span>guidelines, a complete print journal reference should include:<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>Authors&rsquo; surnames and initials (no comma between last name and initials, no periods after initials, no &ldquo;and&rdquo; before last author, and if more than 6 authors give only first 3 authors and add &ldquo;et al.&rdquo; to the end)</li><li>Title of article and subtitle (capitalize only first letter of first word, proper names, and abbreviations that are in all-caps)</li><li>Abbreviated name of journal (use initial caps,<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/nlmcatalog?term=currentlyindexed%5bAll%5d" target="_blank"><u>MEDLINE abbreviations</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>for journal names, and italicize)</li><li>Year published (followed by semicolon; sometimes month is added after year)</li><li>Volume number (closed up to semicolon after year)</li><li>Issue number (in parentheses closed up to volume number and followed by colon)</li><li>Part or supplement number, if relevant (can be included in issue parentheses or in separate parentheses after issue parentheses and the colon moved after it)</li><li>Inclusive page numbers (closed up to colon after parentheses; use hyphen between and do not omit digits from inclusive numbers)</li></ul>The basic style for a citing a print journal article:<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>Author(s). Article title.<span>&nbsp;</span><em>Journal Name</em>. Year;vol(issue No.):inclusive pages.</li></ul></div>  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0;margin-right:0;text-align:center"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/journal-reference_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">Here are some example print journal article references (recognize any names?):<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>Cooper AB, Thornley KS, Young GB, Slutsky AS, Stewart TE, Hanly PJ. Sleep in critically ill patients requiring mechanical ventilation.<span>&nbsp;</span><em>Chest</em>. 2000;117(3):809-818.</li><li>O&rsquo;Connor C, Thornley KS, Hanly PJ. Gender differences in the polysomnographic features of obstructive sleep apnea.<span>&nbsp;</span><em>Am J Respir Crit Care Med</em>. 2000;161:1465-1472.</li></ul><strong>Electronic Journal Articles</strong><br />In this digital age, references are now so much easier to access. Unfortunately, an online presence can be much more transient than print. Links break over time, long uniform resource locators (URLs) are prone to typographical errors (and wreak havoc with typesetting!), and websites can be updated repeatedly so there may be many different versions of the same article. For these reasons, it is important for the author to try to capture all relevant information about an online reference at the time it was accessed. At minimum, this requires the URL and date of access.<br />The sample format is:<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>Author(s). Article title.<span>&nbsp;</span><em>Journal Name</em>. Year;vol(issue No.):inclusive pages. URL. Accessed [date].</li></ul>Some examples:<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>Dancey DR, Tullis ED, Heslegrave R, Thornley K, Hanly PJ. Sleep quality and daytime function in adults with cystic fibrosis and severe lung disease.<span>&nbsp;</span><em>Eur Respir J</em>. 2002 Mar;19(3):504-510.<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://erj.ersjournals.com/content/19/3/504.long" target="_blank"><u>http://erj.ersjournals.com/content/19/3/504.long</u></a>. Accessed November 30, 2014.</li><li>O&rsquo;Connor C, Thornley KS, Hanly PJ. Gender differences in the polysomnographic features of obstructive sleep apnea.<span>&nbsp;</span><em>Am J Respir Crit Care Med</em>. 2000;161:1465-1472.<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.atsjournals.org/doi/abs/10.1164/ajrccm.161.5.9904121?url_ver=Z39.88-2003&amp;rfr_id=ori:rid:crossref.org&amp;rfr_dat=cr_pub%3dpubmed#.VHstI9LF-So" target="_blank"><u>http://www.atsjournals.org/doi/abs/10.1164/ajrccm.161.5.9904121?url_ver=Z39.88-2003&amp;rfr_id=ori:rid:crossref.org&amp;rfr_dat=cr_pub%3dpubmed#.VHstI9LF-So</u></a>. Accessed November 30, 2014.</li></ul>Some points to remember about citing URLs:<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>Give the entire URL without adding in spaces or line breaks to fit the page (this will be done during typesetting)</li><li>Include the protocol (usually the<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http:"><u>http://</u></a>)</li><li>Do not link to sites that require membership to access</li><li>Do not cite indirect URLs (e.g., search engine results)</li><li>Link directly to the specific document when possible (i.e., do not link to a home or menu page)</li></ul><strong>Electronic Document Identification Systems</strong><br />Because URLs can break, change, or disappear altogether, many publishers now require more stable identifiers of online material. Two methods are commonly used: the Digital Object Identifier System and the PubMed Identification Number System. A number of journals that I work for use these identifiers to pull references directly and automatically populate the reference list with the correct information in the correct format (such a time saver!).<br /><strong>Digital Object Identifier System</strong><br />The<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.doi.org/" target="_blank"><u>DOI System</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>was first launched by the International DOI Foundation in 2000. The goal is to provide an &ldquo;actionable, interoperable, and persistent&rdquo; digital network identifier used by publishers and other sectors, such as science data centres and movie studios. In 2012, the DOI System was adopted as the International Standard (<a href="http://www.iso.org/iso/news.htm?refid=Ref1561" target="_blank"><u>ISO 26324</u></a>). They provide a Digital Identifier of an Object (an object can be any physical, digital, or abstract thing). Over 100 million DOIs have been assigned through a federation of Registration Agencies worldwide with an annual growth rate of 16%.<br />There are 2 elements to a DOI: the prefix and the suffix (separated by a forward slash). All DOIs begin with 10 and are of variable lengths, but they never change once they are assigned. For example, the DOI 10.1183/09031936.02.00088702 for the article listed below begins with &ldquo;10&rdquo; like all DOIs, &ldquo;1183&rdquo; is the prefix that was assigned by the DOI Registration Agency, and &ldquo;09031936.02.00088702&rdquo; is the suffix. Readers can type or paste the DOI name (including the 10 at the beginning and all numbers before and after the slash, but excluding extra characters and sentence punctuation marks) at the DOI website (<a href="http://dx.doi.org/" target="_blank"><u>http://dx.doi.org/</u></a>). If you have the DOI, you do not have to provide the URL or accessed date in the reference. The DOI appears as the last item in the reference immediately after &ldquo;doi:&rdquo; and is set closed up (i.e., no space between):<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>Dancey DR, Tullis ED, Heslegrave R, Thornley K, Hanly PJ. Sleep quality and daytime function in adults with cystic fibrosis and severe lung disease.<span>&nbsp;</span><em>Eur Respir J</em>. 2002 Mar;19(3):504-510. doi:10.1183/09031936.02.00088702.</li></ul><strong>PubMed Identifier System</strong><br />For journals indexed by PubMed and part of a PubMed citation, a unique PubMed identifier (PMID) is assigned. Readers can enter the PMID in the search box on the PubMed website (<a href="http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/" target="_blank"><u>http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/</u></a>) to find the article. The PMID is not usually included in the reference citation like the DOI is, but rather is used as a &ldquo;behind-the-scenes&rdquo; identifier or as a link. For example, the PMID for the following article is 10806140 and is used as a link to PubMed website:<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>O&rsquo;Connor C, Thornley KS, Hanly PJ. Gender differences in the polysomnographic features of obstructive sleep apnea.<span>&nbsp;</span><em>Am J Respir Crit Care Med</em>. 2000;161:1465&ndash;1472. [<a href="http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/10806140" target="_blank"><u>PubMed</u></a>]</li></ul><strong>Final Notes</strong><br />Remember that these electronic identification numbers are only identifiers&mdash;they do not provide any information regarding quality of the content or the type of paper identified. They are only there to try to locate a specific article or work in an endless sea of digital information.<br /><br />&#8203;Happy Adventures in Editing!<br /><br /></div>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[An Ode to the Comma: Correct Punctuation Can Save Lives]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/an-ode-to-the-comma-correct-punctuation-can-save-lives]]></link><comments><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/an-ode-to-the-comma-correct-punctuation-can-save-lives#comments]]></comments><pubDate>Sun, 24 Aug 2014 04:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category><![CDATA[Editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Good to know]]></category><category><![CDATA[Grammar]]></category><category><![CDATA[Tips & tricks]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/an-ode-to-the-comma-correct-punctuation-can-save-lives</guid><description><![CDATA[ Even in this age when text is often reduced down to 140 characters or less, don&rsquo;t forget the punctuation. It just could save a life!I recently went to visit my boys at their summer camp. While driving near Algonquin Provincial Park, I saw a handmade sign posted on a front lawn that read &ldquo;Slow Kids Crossing.&rdquo; I was so distracted by the sign (do they mean their kids are physically or mentally slow?) that I could have accidentally hit someone. It is safe to assume they intended & [...] ]]></description><content:encoded><![CDATA[<span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:0px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:0px;*margin-top:0px'><a><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/eat-pic_orig.jpg" style="margin-top: 5px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:0; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;">Even in this age when text is often reduced down to 140 characters or less, don&rsquo;t forget the punctuation. It just could save a life!<br /><br />I recently went to visit my boys at their summer camp. While driving near Algonquin Provincial Park, I saw a handmade sign posted on a front lawn that read &ldquo;Slow Kids Crossing.&rdquo; I was so distracted by the sign (do they mean their kids are physically or mentally slow?) that I could have accidentally hit someone. It is safe to assume they intended &ldquo;Slow, Kids Crossing&rdquo; (or &ldquo;Slow Down, Kids Crossing&rdquo; would have been better), but this example goes to show the power of punctuation.<br /><br />The lack of punctuation in this sign obscured the intended meaning. For those of us who notice this sort of thing, it can be annoying&mdash;and sometimes amusing. Lynne Truss, author of<span>&nbsp;</span><em><a href="http://www.chapters.indigo.ca/books/eats-shoots-leaves-the-zero/9781592402038-item.html?ikwid=eats+shoots+leaves&amp;ikwsec=Home&amp;ikwidx=0" target="_blank"><u>Eats, Shoots &amp; Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation</u></a></em>, says: &ldquo;We are like the little boy in<span>&nbsp;</span><em>The Sixth Sense</em><span>&nbsp;</span>who can see dead people, except that we see can see dead punctuation.&rdquo;<br /><br />The comma is especially complicated because it plays a grammar role, but also a role as an indicator of the rhythm and flow of the sentence. It is also the most controversial punctuation mark. People have very strong opinions about the<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/words/what-is-the-oxford-comma" target="_blank"><u>Oxford (or serial) comma</u></a>, but I will leave that heated topic for another post (there has already been enough bloodshed).<br />&#8203;<br />The comma indicates a slight break between different parts of a sentence. The function of the comma is to group together words, phrases, and clauses to make a sentence clearer to read. The effect of a misplaced or omitted comma can be quite comical at times. Here are some examples from<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.buzzfeed.com/emmyf/25-biggest-comma-fails" target="_blank"><u>25 Biggest Comma Fails</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>on BuzzFeed:<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li><em>Unable to eat diarrhea</em><span>&nbsp;</span>(think he meant to describe his symptoms as &ldquo;unable to eat, diarrhea&rdquo;)</li><li><em>Crap a hole in my yoga pants</em><span>&nbsp;</span>(reads a little different than &ldquo;crap, a hole in my yoga pants&rdquo;)</li><li><em>Man bacon makes anything taste good!</em><span>&nbsp;</span>(I don&rsquo;t even want to know what &ldquo;man bacon&rdquo; is)</li><li><em>Stop clubbing, baby seals</em><span>&nbsp;</span>(can you picture the graphic of the baby seals on the dance floor?)</li></ul> Many people use the comma incorrectly. They either omit it or go<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.theonion.com/articles/commas-turning-up-everywhere,6120/" target="_blank"><u>crazy with the comma</u></a>. Read on for a quick primer in correct comma usage.<br />&#8203;<br /><strong>Commas with relative clauses</strong></div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>  <div><div class="wsite-multicol"><div class="wsite-multicol-table-wrap" style="margin:0 -15px;"> 	<table class="wsite-multicol-table"> 		<tbody class="wsite-multicol-tbody"> 			<tr class="wsite-multicol-tr"> 				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:18.282988871224%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0px;margin-right:0px;text-align:left"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/noun-do-not-enter-181882-e60000_1_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:91;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>   					 				</td>				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:81.717011128776%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">A<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">relative clause</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>is a subordinate clause that usually begins with<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">who</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">which</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">that</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">whom</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">, or<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">where</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">. A<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">restrictive relative clause</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>provides information that is essential to the sentence. This type of clause is never set off by commas from the rest of the sentence (e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">People who own dogs are cool</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">).</span></div>   					 				</td>			</tr> 		</tbody> 	</table> </div></div></div>  <div><div class="wsite-multicol"><div class="wsite-multicol-table-wrap" style="margin:0 -15px;"> 	<table class="wsite-multicol-table"> 		<tbody class="wsite-multicol-tbody"> 			<tr class="wsite-multicol-tr"> 				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:18.282988871224%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0px;margin-right:0px;text-align:left"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/noun-yes-707380-44cc00_1_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>   					 				</td>				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:81.717011128776%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">A<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">nonrestrictive relative clause</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>is a clause that could be pulled from the sentence without affecting understanding of the noun it describes or changing the meaning of the sentence overall. This type of clause requires a comma before and after (e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">Our dog, who is a six years old, hates our cat</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">).&nbsp;</span></div>   					 				</td>			</tr> 		</tbody> 	</table> </div></div></div>  <span class='imgPusher' style='float:left;height:0px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:left;max-width:100%;;clear:left;margin-top:0px;*margin-top:0px'><a><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/published/noun-idea-950791-fff200.png?1536515067" style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 10px; border-width:0; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -10px; margin-bottom: 10px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">A trick to make sure you have used the commas correctly is to take the information enclosed by the commas out&nbsp; from the sentence and see if the sentence still makes sense and conveys the meaning you intended.</span></div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>  <div class="paragraph"><strong>Commas with dependent clauses</strong></div>  <div><div class="wsite-multicol"><div class="wsite-multicol-table-wrap" style="margin:0 -15px;"> 	<table class="wsite-multicol-table"> 		<tbody class="wsite-multicol-tbody"> 			<tr class="wsite-multicol-tr"> 				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:18.571428571429%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0px;margin-right:0px;text-align:left"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/published/noun-yes-707380-44cc00.png?1536515165" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>   					 				</td>				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:81.428571428571%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">If a dependent clause<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">precedes a main clause</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">, it should be followed by a comma (e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">If the cat is lying on the bed, the dog will bark</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">).</span></div>   					 				</td>			</tr> 		</tbody> 	</table> </div></div></div>  <div><div class="wsite-multicol"><div class="wsite-multicol-table-wrap" style="margin:0 -15px;"> 	<table class="wsite-multicol-table"> 		<tbody class="wsite-multicol-tbody"> 			<tr class="wsite-multicol-tr"> 				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:18.571428571429%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0;margin-right:0;text-align:center"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/noun-do-not-enter-181882-e60000_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>   					 				</td>				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:81.428571428571%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">If a dependent clause<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">follows a main clause</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">, it is not preceded by a comma<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">if the dependent clause is restrictive</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>(e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">The dog will bark if the cat is lying on the bed</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">). In this example, it is not necessarily true that the dog will bark, but it is if the cat is lying on the bed.</span></div>   					 				</td>			</tr> 		</tbody> 	</table> </div></div></div>  <div class="paragraph"><strong>Commas with introductory words and phrases</strong></div>  <div><div class="wsite-multicol"><div class="wsite-multicol-table-wrap" style="margin:0 -15px;"> 	<table class="wsite-multicol-table"> 		<tbody class="wsite-multicol-tbody"> 			<tr class="wsite-multicol-tr"> 				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:19.365079365079%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0;margin-right:0;text-align:center"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/noun-yes-707380-44cc00_2_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>   					 				</td>				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:80.634920634921%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">Do use a comma after an<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">introductory exclamatory word</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>(e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">Rats, the dog is barking again</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">), an<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">introductory adverbial clause</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>(e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">After the dog barked, the cat jumped off the bed</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">), an<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">introductory participial phrase</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>(e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">Thrilled with his success, the dog jumped on the bed</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">), an<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">introductory direct address</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>(e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">Baxter, get off the bed!</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">), or an<span> </span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">introductory<span> </span><em>yes</em>,<span>&nbsp;</span><em>no</em>,<span>&nbsp;</span><em>well</em>, etc.</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>(e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">Well, at least he&rsquo;s not barking anymore</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">).</span></div>   					 				</td>			</tr> 		</tbody> 	</table> </div></div></div>  <div><div class="wsite-multicol"><div class="wsite-multicol-table-wrap" style="margin:0 -15px;"> 	<table class="wsite-multicol-table"> 		<tbody class="wsite-multicol-tbody"> 			<tr class="wsite-multicol-tr"> 				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:19.68253968254%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0;margin-right:0;text-align:center"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/noun-do-not-enter-181882-e60000_2_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>   					 				</td>				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:80.31746031746%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">Do not use a comma if the<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">introductory adverbial phrase immediately</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">precedes the verb</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>it modifies (e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">On top of the bed stood the smug dog</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">).</span></div>   					 				</td>			</tr> 		</tbody> 	</table> </div></div></div>  <div class="paragraph"><strong>Commas with independent clauses</strong></div>  <div><div class="wsite-multicol"><div class="wsite-multicol-table-wrap" style="margin:0 -15px;"> 	<table class="wsite-multicol-table"> 		<tbody class="wsite-multicol-tbody"> 			<tr class="wsite-multicol-tr"> 				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:19.236883942766%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0;margin-right:0;text-align:center"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/noun-yes-707380-44cc00_3_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>   					 				</td>				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:80.763116057234%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">When independent clauses are<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">joined by conjunctions</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">, such as<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">and</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">but</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">or</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">so</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">, or<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">yet</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">, a comma usually precedes the conjunction (e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">The dog would not get off the bed, so we slept on the floor</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">).</span></div>   					 				</td>			</tr> 		</tbody> 	</table> </div></div></div>  <div><div class="wsite-multicol"><div class="wsite-multicol-table-wrap" style="margin:0 -15px;"> 	<table class="wsite-multicol-table"> 		<tbody class="wsite-multicol-tbody"> 			<tr class="wsite-multicol-tr"> 				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:19.39586645469%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0;margin-right:0;text-align:center"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/noun-do-not-enter-181882-e60000_3_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>   					 				</td>				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:80.60413354531%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">For<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">compound predicates</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">, a comma is not usually used between two or more verbs that have the same subject and are not complete independent clauses (e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">We tried to pull the dog off the bed but were unable to do so</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">).</span></div>   					 				</td>			</tr> 		</tbody> 	</table> </div></div></div>  <div class="paragraph"><strong>Commas with parenthetical and descriptive phrases</strong></div>  <div><div class="wsite-multicol"><div class="wsite-multicol-table-wrap" style="margin:0 -15px;"> 	<table class="wsite-multicol-table"> 		<tbody class="wsite-multicol-tbody"> 			<tr class="wsite-multicol-tr"> 				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:19.872813990461%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0;margin-right:0;text-align:center"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/noun-yes-707380-44cc00_5_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>   					 				</td>				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:80.127186009539%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;"><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&#8203;</span><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">Commas should be used with<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">parenthetical elements</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>if only a slight break is intended (e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">Our sleep on the floor, in spite of our initial concerns, was surprisingly comfortable</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">).</span></div>   					 				</td>			</tr> 		</tbody> 	</table> </div></div></div>  <div><div class="wsite-multicol"><div class="wsite-multicol-table-wrap" style="margin:0 -15px;"> 	<table class="wsite-multicol-table"> 		<tbody class="wsite-multicol-tbody"> 			<tr class="wsite-multicol-tr"> 				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:19.713831478537%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0;margin-right:0;text-align:center"> <a> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/noun-yes-707380-44cc00_6_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>   					 				</td>				<td class="wsite-multicol-col" style="width:80.286168521463%; padding:0 15px;"> 					 						  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">&#8203;<span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&#8203;</span><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">Commas (sometimes paired with semicolons) are used after<span>&nbsp;</span></span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">adverbs</strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>such as<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">however</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">therefore</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">, and<span> </span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">indeed</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span> </span>(e.g., </span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">However, we do not plan to sleep there again</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">) and around&nbsp;</span><strong style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">phrases introduced by<span>&nbsp;</span><em>such as</em><span>&nbsp;</span>and<span>&nbsp;</span><em>including</em></strong><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>when they are used nonrestrictively (e.g.,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">All of us, including the dog and cat, can sleep on the bed</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">).</span></div>   					 				</td>			</tr> 		</tbody> 	</table> </div></div></div>  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">I hope you learned something from this very general introduction to using the comma. Stay tuned for a separate post in which I will discuss the use of the comma in lists.<br /><br />Happy Adventures in Editing!</div>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Health Risks of Editing (Part 2): Reducing Your Risk]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/health-risks-of-editing-part-2-reducing-your-risk]]></link><comments><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/health-risks-of-editing-part-2-reducing-your-risk#comments]]></comments><pubDate>Mon, 04 Aug 2014 04:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category><![CDATA[Editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Exercise]]></category><category><![CDATA[Good to know]]></category><category><![CDATA[Health Risk]]></category><category><![CDATA[Sitting]]></category><category><![CDATA[Writing]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/health-risks-of-editing-part-2-reducing-your-risk</guid><description><![CDATA[Image from CartoonStock.com (used with permission) In my&nbsp;last post, I discussed the results of a&nbsp;recent study&nbsp;that found our sedentary editing and writing jobs increase our risk for some cancers. In part two, I offer some tips that may just save your life (I like to think so anyway).&#8203;Move during the day&ldquo;Sitting is the new smoking,&rdquo; says&nbsp;Brigid Dineen, Life Coach, yoga instructor, and organizer for the&nbsp;Yogapalooza&nbsp;festival in Toronto. &ldquo;Althoug [...] ]]></description><content:encoded><![CDATA[<span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:0px'></span><span style='display: table;width:273px;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:0px;*margin-top:0px'><a><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/editor/mbcn2785-hi.jpg?1536513298" style="margin-top: 5px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:0; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption">Image from CartoonStock.com (used with permission)</span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;">In my<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="https://kristinethornley.wordpress.com/2014/08/03/health-risks-of-editing-part-1-the-dangers-of-a-sedentary-job/"><u>last post</u></a>, I discussed the results of a<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://jnci.oxfordjournals.org/content/106/7/dju098.full?_ga=1.120763020.529565455.1406255000" target="_blank"><u>recent study</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>that found our sedentary editing and writing jobs increase our risk for some cancers. In part two, I offer some tips that may just save your life (I like to think so anyway).<br />&#8203;<br /><strong>Move during the day</strong><br />&ldquo;Sitting is the new smoking,&rdquo; says<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.brigiddineen.com/" target="_blank"><u>Brigid Dineen</u></a>, Life Coach, yoga instructor, and organizer for the<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://yogapalooza.ca/" target="_blank"><u>Yogapalooza</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>festival in Toronto. &ldquo;Although you can&rsquo;t quit sitting, you can take action to minimize its consequences on your health and well-being.&rdquo;<br /><br />Brigid suggests we take a break and get moving at least once an hour. &ldquo;It will help to improve your posture, your circulation, your stress levels and mood, and your mental focus. You will also reduce your risk of back pain, weight gain and becoming a &lsquo;zombie&rsquo; from staring at the screen for too long.&rdquo;<br />&#8203;<br />Any activity will do. Take a walk, do some stretches, or&mdash;Brigid&rsquo;s favorite&mdash;take a dance break! Be intentional about taking a break or the day will get away from you (even set a timer to remind you). Here are some great options:<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li><a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Eo470b4SvlM&amp;feature=youtu.be" target="_blank"><u>Yoga at Your Desk</u></a></li><li><a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JP2sg5IGmcQ&amp;feature=youtu.be&amp;list=UUTpRe9umTa2NwSTfCapYfxQ" target="_blank"><u>Sun Salutations</u></a></li><li>Dance to Pharrell Williams&rsquo; &ldquo;<a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y6Sxv-sUYtM&amp;feature=youtu.be" target="_blank"><u>Happy</u></a>&rdquo;!</li></ul><br /><strong>Get your vitamin D</strong><br /><a href="http://www.webmd.com/food-recipes/vitamin-d-deficiency" target="_blank"><u>Vitamin D deficiency</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>may be the biological pathway through which excessive sitting increases cancer risk. If you can&rsquo;t get outside during the day for a walk to catch some natural vitamin D, take a supplement.<br /><br /><strong>Be more active outside work hours</strong><br />Sitting risk is cumulative. If you work at a desk all day and spend your evenings sitting on the couch watching TV, you are in real trouble. Spend your leisure time being more active. Take a walk. Take up a sport. Learn ballroom dancing. Just get moving!<br /><br /><strong>For your workspace</strong><br />Some people like to use a<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://lifehacker.com/five-best-standing-desks-1528244287" target="_blank"><u>standing desk</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>or sit on an<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.prevention.com/fitness/fitness-tips/should-you-replace-your-office-chair-stability-ball" target="_blank"><u>exercise ball</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>while working. Even just placing your garbage can or printer on the other side of the room will help because you will have to get up to use them during the day.<br /><br />Tell us, what do you do to break up your sitting time during the day?</div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Health Risks of Editing (Part 1): The Dangers of a Sedentary Job]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/health-risks-of-editing-part-1-the-dangers-of-a-sedentary-job]]></link><comments><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/health-risks-of-editing-part-1-the-dangers-of-a-sedentary-job#comments]]></comments><pubDate>Sun, 03 Aug 2014 04:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category><![CDATA[Cancer]]></category><category><![CDATA[Editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Good to know]]></category><category><![CDATA[Health Risk]]></category><category><![CDATA[Sitting]]></category><category><![CDATA[Writing]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/health-risks-of-editing-part-1-the-dangers-of-a-sedentary-job</guid><description><![CDATA[ &#8203;I never considered editing a dangerous job. In fact, editing fulfilled all my safe job criteria: it involved a lot of sitting and could be done in my pajamas. The only danger was an occasional coffee spill. New research finds sedentary desk jobs, such as writing or editing, can increase our risk for cancer&mdash;and even exercising every day does not reduce this risk.Sitting is the new smokingExcessive sitting has already been found to increase our risk of obesity as well as cardiovascul [...] ]]></description><content:encoded><![CDATA[<span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:0px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:0px;*margin-top:0px'><a><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/sitting-danger_orig.jpg" style="margin-top: 5px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:1px;padding:3px; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;">&#8203;I never considered editing a dangerous job. In fact, editing fulfilled all my safe job criteria: it involved a lot of sitting and could be done in my pajamas. The only danger was an occasional coffee spill. New research finds sedentary desk jobs, such as writing or editing, can increase our risk for cancer&mdash;and even exercising every day does not reduce this risk.<br /><br /><strong>Sitting is the new smoking</strong><br />Excessive sitting has already been found to increase our risk of obesity as well as cardiovascular disease, diabetes, hypertension and even depression. According to a<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://jnci.oxfordjournals.org/content/106/7/dju098.full?_ga=1.120763020.529565455.1406255000" target="_blank"><u>recent meta-analysis</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>of 43 observational studies that included over 4 million individuals and 68,936 cancer cases, increased sitting time each day also increases our chance of colon, endometrial and lung cancers. In addition, each two-hour per day increase in sedentary time was related to a statistically significant 8% and 10% increase in<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/colon-cancer/basics/definition/con-20031877"><u>colon cancer</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>and<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.mayoclinic.org/search/search-results?q=endometrial%20cancer"><u>endometrial cancer</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>risk, respectively (a 6% increased risk of<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/lung-cancer/basics/definition/con-20025531"><u>lung cancer</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>was borderline significant).<br />Several mechanisms were suggested including increased weight gain and obesity, vitamin D deficiency, and inflammatory responses triggered within the body.<br /><br /><strong>All sitting is not created equal</strong><br />Sitting watching TV was found to more detrimental than occupational sitting. Another<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="https://www.sanjuancollege.edu/Documents/AlliedHealth/HHPC/Fitness%20Education/ResearchArticles/Disease/TV_Watching_and_Obesity_in_Women.pdf"><u>prospective study</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>reported that each two-hour per day increase in TV time was associated with a 23% increased risk of obesity, but only a 5% increased obesity risk for sitting at work time. The authors suggest that this is because we are more likely to snack on unhealthy food while watching TV.<br />&#8203;<br /><strong>Exercise&nbsp;isn&rsquo;t&nbsp;enough</strong><br />Perhaps even more concerning was that adjusting for exercise did not affect the positive association between sedentary behavior and cancer in this most recent study. This means that the increased cancer risk is not just due to inactivity and that exercising after sitting all day isn&rsquo;t enough to counteract this risk. It is like thinking that going for a jog will make up for smoking a pack of cigarettes a day.<br />But wait&mdash;you don&rsquo;t need to change careers! Read part two to find ways to lessen your risk.</div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Crowdsourcing Copyediting]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/crowdsourcing-copyediting]]></link><comments><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/crowdsourcing-copyediting#comments]]></comments><pubDate>Wed, 30 Jul 2014 04:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category><![CDATA[Editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Editor]]></category><category><![CDATA[Good to know]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/crowdsourcing-copyediting</guid><description><![CDATA[&ldquo;Too many cooks spoil the broth&rdquo;&nbsp;&ndash;English proverb   Today&rsquo;s adventure in editing was&nbsp;an &ldquo;offer&rdquo; I had not seen since I first started out in editing. An author wanted me to edit a chapter of his book&mdash;for free (&ldquo;it was only one chapter&rdquo;). Presumably as many editors as he had chapters in his book were also contacted with this deal. His goal was to end up with an edited book for nothing. Almost every editor has been approached with this [...] ]]></description><content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote style="text-align:left;"><font color="#656565">&ldquo;Too many cooks spoil the broth&rdquo;&nbsp;&ndash;English proverb</font></blockquote>  <span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:0px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:0px;*margin-top:0px'><a><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/crowdsourcing-525x350_orig.jpg" style="margin-top: 5px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:0; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;">Today&rsquo;s adventure in editing was&nbsp;an &ldquo;offer&rdquo; I had not seen since I first started out in editing. An author wanted me to edit a chapter of his book&mdash;for free (&ldquo;it was only one chapter&rdquo;). Presumably as many editors as he had chapters in his book were also contacted with this deal. His goal was to end up with an edited book for nothing. Almost every editor has been approached with this scam at some point during their career. Sometimes we are offered a pittance; sometimes we are promised &ldquo;great exposure.&rdquo;<br /><br /><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&ldquo;Next time I go grocery shopping,&rdquo; said fellow editor</span><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&nbsp;</span><a href="http://katherinebarber.blogspot.ca/" target="_blank"><u style="color:rgb(81, 153, 168)">Katherine Barber</u></a><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">, &ldquo;I&rsquo;m going to say, &lsquo;Hey Loblaws, give me my groceries for nothing and I&rsquo;ll tell all my friends on Facebook and Twitter how wonderful you are.</span><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&rsquo; &rdquo;</span><br />&#8203;<br />You wouldn&rsquo;t do it with your grocery store&mdash;it is just as inappropriate when dealing with a professional editor.<br /><br />It is usually an inexperienced author who tries this, one who does not understand the role or the value of an editor. One of the primary goals of editing is consistency, consistency, consistency. How do you achieve this with a dozen different editors?<br /><br />Yes, editing can be expensive (it is a professional service after all). If you truly think you have &ldquo;probably the greatest story ever written&rdquo; (actual quote), don&rsquo;t shortchange your work by farming it out in small chunks to many different editors in an effort to save money. You might actually have the greatest story<span>&nbsp;</span><em>idea</em><span>&nbsp;</span>ever, but if you are an inexperienced writer it takes a lot of work&mdash;by you and your editor&mdash;to get it to greatest story level.<br /><br />How can you afford an editor? You are creative&mdash;think creatively! But be sure to discuss your proposal with your editor before editing begins. After you receive the invoice is not the time to propose your idea. Here are some suggestions to get you started (with many thanks to the members of the<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="https://www.facebook.com/groups/442424952497363/" target="_blank"><u>Editors&rsquo; Association of Earth</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>Facebook group for their wonderful recommendations and anecdotes).<br /><br /><strong>Barter</strong><br />Everyone has something to offer and many editors are open to bartering. The EAE editors have received bottles of wine (what wouldn&rsquo;t I do for some bottles of wine?), pieces of art, laundry or grocery delivery, meals, or services such as house painting or installing carpet. Remember that bartering is still counted as income and subject to tax (editors will have to issue a receipt with an equivalent dollar amount and submit at tax time).<br /><br /><strong>Crowdfund</strong><br />Crowdsourcing is splitting a large task up into very small projects that are completed by many different people. Instead of splitting up the job into pieces, split the cost of hiring a good editor.<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://ncfacanada.org/learning-center/" target="_blank"><u>Crowdfunding</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>is raising money through small contributions from a large number of people via the Internet and social media.<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://pubslush.com/" target="_blank"><u>Pubslush</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>is a crowdfunding platform specifically for authors, but there are many other crowdfunding sites, such as<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="https://www.indiegogo.com/" target="_blank"><u>Indiegogo</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>and<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="https://www.kickstarter.com/" target="_blank"><u>Kickstarter</u></a>. You could offer contributors a signed copy of your book once published, a chance to name a character, or an acknowledgement within the book.<br /><br /><strong>Hire a recent grad</strong><br />It is very difficult for a new editor just starting out to establish themselves and generate clients. A recent grad from a publishing program may be willing to do the project for less money to build their project list. They should have formal editing training. You want them to have the skills&mdash;they just may not be as quick as a more experienced editor. The<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://ce-online.ryerson.ca/ce/default.aspx?id=2000" target="_blank"><u>Publishing</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>program at Ryerson University in Toronto (where I studied publishing) offers a<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://ce-online.ryerson.ca/ce/default.aspx?id=2318" target="_blank"><u>job announcement service</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>for grads. You can<span>&nbsp;</span><a>contact them</a><span>&nbsp;</span>with the details of your project and they will distribute your job posting to current students and alumni free of charge. Check your local universities for a similar service if you live outside the Toronto area.<br /><br /><strong>Do the work yourself</strong><br />Maybe hiring an editor is completely out of the question for you financially. There are many books out there that can teach you the basics. It just takes an investment of your time&mdash;and a library card. The bonus is that you now will have these self-editing skills for your next project. Here are some of&nbsp;my favourites:<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li><em><a href="http://www.amazon.ca/Forest-Trees-Revised-Updated-Editors/dp/159448483X/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1406765271&amp;sr=8-1&amp;keywords=the+forest+for+the+trees"><u>The Forest for the Trees: An Editor&rsquo;s Advice to Writers</u></a></em>by Betsy Lerner</li><li><em><a href="http://www.amazon.ca/Grammatically-Correct-Essential-Spelling-Punctuation/dp/1582976163/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1406765744&amp;sr=8-1&amp;keywords=grammatically+correct"><u>Grammatically Correct: The Essential Guide to Spelling, Style, Usage, Grammar, and Punctuation</u></a></em><span>&nbsp;</span>by Anne Stilman</li><li><em><a href="http://www.amazon.ca/Complete-Guide-Editing-Your-Fiction/dp/1582971625/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1406765309&amp;sr=8-2&amp;keywords=editing+your+fiction+seidman"><u>The Complete Guide to Editing Your Fiction</u></a></em><span>&nbsp;</span>by Michael Seidman</li><li><em><a><u>Fiction Writer&rsquo;s Workshop</u></a></em><span>&nbsp;</span>by Josip Novakovich</li><li><em><a href="http://www.amazon.ca/Most-Common-Fiction-Writing-Mistakes/dp/0898798213/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1406765394&amp;sr=8-1&amp;keywords=the+38+most+common+fiction+writing"><u>The 38 Most Common Fiction Writing Mistakes (And How to Avoid Them)</u></a></em><span>&nbsp;</span>by Jack Bickman</li><li><em><a href="http://www.amazon.ca/Thinking-Like-Editor-Susan-Rabiner/dp/0393324613/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1406765439&amp;sr=8-1&amp;keywords=thinking+like+your+editor"><u>Thinking Like Your Editor</u></a></em><span>&nbsp;</span>by Susan Rabiner and Alfred Fortunato</li><li><em><a href="http://www.amazon.ca/Writing-Well-30th-Anniversary-Nonfiction/dp/0060891548/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1406765470&amp;sr=8-1&amp;keywords=on+writing+well"><u>On Writing Well: The Classic Guide to Writing Nonfiction</u></a></em><span>&nbsp;</span>by William Zinsser</li><li><em><a href="http://www.amazon.ca/Chicago-Manual-Style-16th/dp/0226104206/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1406765499&amp;sr=8-1&amp;keywords=chicago+manual+of+style"><u>The Chicago Manual of Style</u></a></em></li></ul><br /><strong>Get a little help from your friends</strong><br />Have as many people as possible&mdash;your spouse, friends, relatives, the guy down the street&mdash;read your manuscript and provide feedback. This is a good start, but know that because these people have a relationship with you, their feedback is going to be censored somewhat. As famous editor<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.nytimes.com/1998/05/20/arts/alan-d-williams-72-editor-of-thrillers-and-of-literature.html"><u>Alan D. Williams</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>has said, &ldquo;An editor [does] something that almost no friend, relative, or even spouse is qualified or willing to do, namely to read every line with care, to comment in detail with absolute candor, and to suggest changes where they seem desirable, or even essential. In doing this the editor is acting as the first truly disinterested reader, giving the author not only constructive help but also, one hopes, the first inkling of how reviewers, readers, and the marketplace&hellip;will react, so that the author can revise accordingly.&rdquo; You do need unbiased eyes to assess your work, so another option is to join a writers&rsquo; group or<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Writing_circle"><u>writing circle</u></a>. They are all writers and committed to writing. Their input could be invaluable. But it is not a one-way street. You will be expected to help with other writers&rsquo; works too. Check your local<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.torontopubliclibrary.ca/programs-and-classes/categories/book-clubs-writers-groups.jsp"><u>library</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>for a group that meets face-to-face or check the Web for online writing groups, such as<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.scribophile.com/"><u>Scribophile</u></a>.<br /><br />Share some of your creative ideas or your past experiences. Happy Adventures in Editing!<br /><br />P.S. Make sure to visit&nbsp;Katherine&rsquo;s<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://katherinebarber.blogspot.ca/" target="_blank"><u>Wordlady</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>blog too&mdash;it is wonderful.</div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reaching Your Audience: Testing Readability]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/reaching-your-audience-testing-readability]]></link><comments><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/reaching-your-audience-testing-readability#comments]]></comments><pubDate>Sun, 20 Jul 2014 04:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category><![CDATA[Plain writing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Readability]]></category><category><![CDATA[Tips & tricks]]></category><category><![CDATA[Writing]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/reaching-your-audience-testing-readability</guid><description><![CDATA[ For a recent class in&nbsp;Advanced Writing for Health Communicators, we had to compare the websites of the&nbsp;Boston Ballet&nbsp;and the&nbsp;Boston Red Sox. The Boston Ballet website is sophisticated, formal, and elegant; the Red Sox website is bright, energetic, and busy. The writing and the readability of the websites are&nbsp;also very different indicating that they are purposefully trying to reach very different audiences. So what exactly is readability and how can you gauge the readabi [...] ]]></description><content:encoded><![CDATA[<span class='imgPusher' style='float:left;height:0px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:left;max-width:100%;;clear:left;margin-top:0px;*margin-top:0px'><a><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/ballet-baseball_orig.png" style="margin-top: 5px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 10px; border-width:0; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;">For a recent class in<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://healthcommunication.bu.edu/" target="_blank"><u>Advanced Writing for Health Communicators</u></a>, we had to compare the websites of the<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.bostonballet.org/" target="_blank"><u>Boston Ballet</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>and the<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://boston.redsox.mlb.com/index.jsp?c_id=bos" target="_blank"><u>Boston Red Sox</u></a>. The Boston Ballet website is sophisticated, formal, and elegant; the Red Sox website is bright, energetic, and busy. The writing and the readability of the websites are&nbsp;also very different indicating that they are purposefully trying to reach very different audiences. So what exactly is readability and how can you gauge the readability of your own documents? Read on to learn more.<br /><br /><strong>Readability and readability tests</strong><br />Readability is the ease with which your writing can be read.<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Readability_test" target="_blank"><u>Readability tests</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>are mathematical calculations typically based on the difficulty of the words used (i.e., the average number of syllables per word) and the difficulty of the sentences (i.e., the average sentence length). For this article, I will discuss only the ones that are freely available and built into<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://office.microsoft.com/en-ca/word-help/test-your-document-s-readability-HP010148506.aspx" target="_blank"><u>Microsoft Word</u></a>.<br /><br /><strong>Pros and cons of readability tests</strong><br />Readability tests are only predictions&mdash;they are not the definitive measure of how good your writing is. They should be used as a quick assessment during the writing/revision process. As Cheryl Stephens writes in her article<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://plainlanguage.com/newreadability.html" target="_blank"><u>All About Readability</u></a>, readability tests cannot measure reader interest or enjoyment. They also cannot measure if your content is presented in a logical order, how well complex ideas are presented, or if your vocabulary is appropriate. Readability tests are best used as a screening device and they should not be the only tool you use for assessing your text. They are also good for gauging improvement in your writing if you are trying to learn how to write more clearly because they provide a quantitative number for comparison.<br />&#8203;<br /><strong>Comparing ballet and baseball</strong><br />For my class, I compared the readability stats of the history page of the<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.bostonballet.org/about/history.html" target="_blank"><u>Boston Ballet</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>website and the 2010s history timeline of the<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://boston.redsox.mlb.com/bos/history/timeline.jsp" target="_blank"><u>Red Sox</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>website. In Microsoft Word, the readability statistics are available in the Review toolbar under Spelling and Grammar. You may need to make sure that &ldquo;Check grammar with spelling&rdquo; is checked under Proofing in the Options menu first.<br />The Ballet site had more words per sentence and more characters per word than the Red Sox site (i.e., used bigger words and longer sentences). Readability testing results are listed below:</div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>  <div id="379758987437498908"><div><style type="text/css">	#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table-wrapper {  padding: 20px 0;}#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table {  width: 100%;  border: 1px solid #C9CDCF;  border-spacing: 0;}#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table td.cell {  border-right: 1px solid #C9CDCF;  border-bottom: 1px solid #C9CDCF;  word-break: break-word;  background-color: #FFFFFF;  width: 33.333333333333%;}#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table td.cell .paragraph {  width: 90%;  margin: 0 5%;  padding-bottom: 10px;  padding-top: 10px;  text-align: center;}#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table.style-top tr:first-child td,#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table.style-side td:first-of-type {  background-color: #f7b733;}#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table.style-top tr:first-child td .paragraph,#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table.style-side td:first-of-type .paragraph {  font-weight: 700;}#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table tr:last-child td {  border-bottom: none;}#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table td:last-of-type {  border-right: none;}#element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274 .simple-table .empty-content-area-element {  padding-left: 0px !important;}</style><div id="element-c1755871-5fbb-4c1e-9584-c3a5aa2ed274" data-platform-element-id="702688850553606843-1.4.3" class="platform-element-contents">	<div class="simple-table-wrapper">  <table class="simple-table style-top">      <tr>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">Readability measure</div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph">Ballet</div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph">Red Sox</div></td>      </tr>      <tr>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">Passive sentences</div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph">5%</div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph">12%</div></td>      </tr>      <tr>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">Flesch Reading Ease</div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph">19.6</div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph">51.5</div></td>      </tr>      <tr>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">Flesh-Kincaid Grade Level</div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph">16.4</div></td>          <td class="cell"><div class="paragraph">10.7</div></td>      </tr>  </table></div></div><div style="clear:both;"></div></div></div>  <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;"><strong>Passive sentences</strong><br />The test simply finds the percentage of sentences in the document that are written in the passive voice. For writing in plain language, one of the first tips is to<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://kristinethornley.wordpress.com/2014/07/03/eschew-obfuscation-writing-in-plain-language/" target="_blank"><u>write in the active vs. the passive</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>voice. In the active voice, the subject does the acting (e.g., the cat chased the dog); in the passive, the subject is acted on (e.g., the dog was chased by the cat). (I use these examples because that is the way it happens in my house.) Passive sentences flip around the sequence and natural order of the sentence and are more difficult to read. There is no strict guideline, except try to keep it as low as possible. Greater than 5% would be too high for plain writing. Surprisingly, the Red Sox site not only had more passive sentences than the Ballet site, but at 12%, it was well above an appropriate level. Not only are active sentences easier to read, they have more energy, which is exactly what they should be going for on the Red Sox site. I expected that the proportion of passive sentences would have been higher for the Ballet site&mdash;the fact that it is not shows that they had a good writer.<br /><br /><strong>Flesch Reading Ease</strong><br />The Flesch Reading Ease test rates text on a 100-point scale. The higher the score, the easier it is to understand the document. For most standard documents for a general audience, the score should be between 60 and 70. Neither the Ballet or Red Sox site made this cutoff (19.6 and 51.5, respectively), but the Ballet website was definitely low indicating that they were not even attempting to reach a &ldquo;general&rdquo; audience. The Red Sox site is obviously trying to reach this general audience but missed the mark.<br /><br /><strong>Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level</strong><br />The Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level test rates text on a U.S. school grade level (e.g., a score of 8.0 means that an eighth grader can understand the document). Most documents for a general audience should score between 7.0 to 8.0. Again, both websites scored outside of this ideal range for a general audience. The Red Sox site read at a grade 10 level and the Ballet site read at a senior year in university level. The Ballet site appears to be focusing on people who are university/college-educated (and who potentially have money and will buy tickets and/or donate) and the Red Sox site is geared toward those with a lower high school education.<br /><br />The takeaway from these tests is that both websites are trying to reach a different audience with their writing, although the Red Sox site was the less successful of the two. The Red Sox site should be geared toward a more general audience; therefore, the passive sentences should be at a minimum, the Flesch Reading Ease test score should be well about 60, and the Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level needs to drop a few years.<br /><br /><strong>Other methods of testing readability</strong><br />Here are some other suggestions for testing and improving the readability of your work:<ol style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>Use a guideline or checklist as you write, such as the US National Institutes of Health<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.nih.gov/clearcommunication/plainlanguage/gettingstarted/NIH_Plain_Language_Checklist.pdf" target="_blank"><u>Plain Language Checklist</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>or the PlainLanguage.gov<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.plainlanguage.gov/howto/quickreference/checklist.cfm" target="_blank"><u>Document Checklist for Plain Language</u></a></li><li>Devise your own document audit instrument or questionnaire to use</li><li>Ask an expert in the field who knows the needs and characteristics of your audience to review your work</li><li>Test your work with a sample reader or a focus group and revise based on what you have learned</li><li>At the very least, sleep on it and re-read it again the next day with fresh eyes</li></ol>&#8203;<br /> <strong>Identify your audience</strong><br />The most important thing you can do to make sure that you are reaching your audience is to determine&nbsp;who your audience is. Before you even start writing, ask yourself:<ul style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)"><li>Who is my audience?</li><li>What is my purpose or message?</li></ul> If you can answer these questions and keep these answers in mind while writing, you will go a long way toward reaching the audience you intend to reach.</div>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Grammar Tips From the Oatmeal]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/grammar-tips-from-the-oatmeal]]></link><comments><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/grammar-tips-from-the-oatmeal#comments]]></comments><pubDate>Mon, 14 Jul 2014 04:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category><![CDATA[Editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Good to know]]></category><category><![CDATA[Grammar]]></category><category><![CDATA[Tips & tricks]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/grammar-tips-from-the-oatmeal</guid><description><![CDATA[The question came up today about when to use&nbsp;who&nbsp;versus&nbsp;whom. Let us seek the answer from&nbsp;The Oatmeal.&nbsp;They&nbsp;provide far more&nbsp;entertaining&nbsp;answers&nbsp;to grammar questions &nbsp;than I could offer&nbsp;(I am just not that inspired by the apostrophe). Check out the links below. Do you agree? Is the semicolon the most-feared punctuation on Earth?                                   [...] ]]></description><content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;"><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">The question came up today about when to use<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">who</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400"><span>&nbsp;</span>versus<span>&nbsp;</span></span><em style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101)">whom</em><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">. Let us seek the answer from&nbsp;</span><a href="http://theoatmeal.com/" target="_blank"><u>The Oatmeal</u></a><span style="color:rgb(101, 101, 101); font-weight:400">.&nbsp;They&nbsp;provide far more&nbsp;entertaining&nbsp;answers&nbsp;to grammar questions &nbsp;than I could offer&nbsp;(I am just not that inspired by the apostrophe). Check out the links below. Do you agree? Is the semicolon the most-feared punctuation on Earth?</span></div>  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0px;margin-right:0px;text-align:center"> <a href='http://theoatmeal.com/comics/who_vs_whom' target='_blank'> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/published/who-vs-whom-header.png?1536510566" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>  <div class="wsite-spacer" style="height:33px;"></div>  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0px;margin-right:0px;text-align:center"> <a href='http://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon' target='_blank'> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/semicolon_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>  <div class="wsite-spacer" style="height:32px;"></div>  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0px;margin-right:0px;text-align:center"> <a href='http://theoatmeal.com/comics/ie' target='_blank'> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/ie-header_orig.png" alt="Picture" style="width:auto;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>  <div class="wsite-spacer" style="height:30px;"></div>  <div><div class="wsite-image wsite-image-border-none " style="padding-top:10px;padding-bottom:10px;margin-left:0px;margin-right:0px;text-align:center"> <a href='http://theoatmeal.com/comics/apostrophe' target='_blank'> <img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/published/header-apostrophe.png?1536510558" alt="Picture" style="width:385;max-width:100%" /> </a> <div style="display:block;font-size:90%"></div> </div></div>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Getting Word to Work for You: Tools for Editing in Word]]></title><link><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/getting-word-to-work-for-you-tools-for-editing-in-word]]></link><comments><![CDATA[https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/getting-word-to-work-for-you-tools-for-editing-in-word#comments]]></comments><pubDate>Wed, 09 Jul 2014 04:00:00 GMT</pubDate><category><![CDATA[Editing]]></category><category><![CDATA[Microsoft Word]]></category><category><![CDATA[Tips & tricks]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">https://www.kristinethornley.com/blog/getting-word-to-work-for-you-tools-for-editing-in-word</guid><description><![CDATA[As a medical and scientific editor, I use different editing add-ins and programs for&nbsp;Microsoft Word&nbsp;that do a lot of the editing grunt work. I use these tools to clean up and prepare a paper before editing, to simplify and quicken the process while editing, and to verify that everything is consistent after editing. They are all real time savers&mdash;I never want to go back to editing on paper!I use a number of different add-ins and programs for Microsoft Word on PC. I don&rsquo;t know [...] ]]></description><content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;">As a medical and scientific editor, I use different editing add-ins and programs for<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://office.microsoft.com/en-ca/word/" target="_blank"><u>Microsoft Word</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>that do a lot of the editing grunt work. I use these tools to clean up and prepare a paper before editing, to simplify and quicken the process while editing, and to verify that everything is consistent after editing. They are all real time savers&mdash;I never want to go back to editing on paper!<br />I use a number of different add-ins and programs for Microsoft Word on PC. I don&rsquo;t know if these are available for other word processors (are there others?) or if they are also available for Mac. Note that I am using Word 2010 and that these may not be available for earlier versions of Word. I have included current prices for them, but many do offer a free trial. Here is a list of the ones I use in the typical order that I use them.</div>  <span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:77px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:20px;*margin-top:40px'><a href='http://www.editorium.com/14845.htm' target='_blank'><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/filecleaner_orig.png" style="margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:1px;padding:3px; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;"><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:700">Before Editing</span><br /><a href="http://www.editorium.com/14845.htm"><u>FileCleaner for Microsoft Word</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>by The Editorium (US $29.95)<br />Some papers arrive as a bit of a visual mess with multiple&nbsp;fonts and font sizes, weird spacing, and unusual punctuation styles. With these papers, it&rsquo;s hard to see the forest for the trees. Before I even start editing a paper (except those preformatted by the journal), I clean it up with FileCleaner. I use it to strip all of the formatting, get rid of all of those pesky double spaces after periods, and any multiple returns or unnecessary tabs. It can also automatically put punctuation within quotation marks, change hyphens between numbers to en dashes, and even change a capital O used as number to zero. It can do this for a single active document, all open documents, or even a whole directory at one time. After running FileCleaner, I can change the paper to a consistent font and a comfortable font size and it is ready for editing.<br />&#8203;<br /><a href="http://www.archivepub.co.uk/macros.html"><u>FRedit</u></a><span>&nbsp;</span>by Paul Beverley (Free!)<br />This one is a bit more complex to use because it uses macros (an alien language to me), but it is very powerful once you get the hang of it. FRedit is a scripted global find-and-replace macro. You write in a Word file a list of words to find with their replacements. FRedit then uses this script to search an open document for these words and then replaces them with the words that you indicated (don&rsquo;t forget to turn on Track Changes beforehand!). This is a very simplified description of what it can do. The power is that you can have multiple scripts with multiple find and replaces within each script. For example, one script that I use for an American journal changes spelling from UK to US (and I can keep adding words to the list), changes numbers to numerals, removes hyphens from prefixes (as per AMA style), changes certain words to preferred spellings, and italicizes statistical terms, such as<span>&nbsp;</span><em>P</em>,<span>&nbsp;</span><em>F</em>,<span>&nbsp;</span><em>r</em>, and<span>&nbsp;</span><em>d</em>. I have another script that I run without Track Changes on that highlights tricky words and phrases that are commonly misused. I don&rsquo;t even scratch the surface of what FRedit is capable of doing, but it already saves me so much time. Paul has always been helpful when I have had questions or problems. He also has a free 600-page book,<span>&nbsp;</span><a href="http://www.archivepub.co.uk/book.html"><em><u>Macros for Writers and Editors</u></em></a>. And you can&rsquo;t beat the price (he does suggest a &pound;10 donation to charity)!</div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>  <span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:37px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:20px;*margin-top:40px'><a href='http://wordsnsync.com/edittools.php' target='_blank'><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/edittools_orig.jpg" style="margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:1px;padding:3px; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;"><strong><font color="#7b8c89" size="4">During Editing</font></strong><br /><a href="http://wordsnsync.com/edittools.php"><u style="color:rgb(81, 153, 168)">EditTools</u></a><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&nbsp;</span><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">by wordsnSync (US $69.00)</span><br /><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">This add-in has many functions, but what I use it for is its Insert Query&nbsp;function. Like you, I have standard queries or comments that I use all the time. With Insert Query, I don&rsquo;t have to write these out over and over again. I can insert them with just a click of a button. The Insert Query function allows me to organize the queries by journal or topic (e.g., &ldquo;statistics queries&rdquo;). Under each of these tabs, I have saved the queries that I use most often or ones that are quite lengthy. The queries can be inserted inline or as a comment, whatever you prefer. EditTools offers many more functions (Wildcard Find and Replace, Language Conversion, Page Number Format, etc.), but I do not use them so I cannot comment on them. The Insert Query function alone is worth the price for me.</span><br /><br /><a href="http://www.lww.com/Product/9781469862309"><u style="color:rgb(81, 153, 168)">Stedman&rsquo;s Medical/Pharmaceutical Spellchecker</u></a><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&nbsp;</span><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">by Wolters Kluwer Health (US $99.95)</span><br /><em style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137)">Stedman&rsquo;s Medical Dictionary</em><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&nbsp;</span><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">is a must for any medical writer or editor. The Stedman&rsquo;s Spellchecker is a software program that integrates with the existing spellchecker within Word to automatically spellcheck all medical words. Do you really want to look up words like myringostapediopexy every time? Stedman&rsquo;s Spellchecker runs automatically (you don&rsquo;t have to run a separate application) and it contains nearly 500,000 medical, pharmaceutical, and bioscience terms as well as medical equipment, surgical procedures, diagnostic tests. The new 2014 version includes a universal spellchecker that will spellcheck across your entire desktop. The software comes on CD-ROM that you install onto your computer.</span>&#8203;</div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>  <span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:23px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:20px;*margin-top:40px'><a href='http://www.editorium.com/14842.htm' target='_blank'><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/editors-toolkit_orig.jpg" style="margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:1px;padding:3px; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;">&#8203;<a href="http://www.editorium.com/14842.htm"><u style="color:rgb(81, 153, 168)">Editor&rsquo;s ToolKit</u></a><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&nbsp;</span><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">by The Editorium (US $29.95)</span><br /><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">Editor&rsquo;s ToolKit includes a lot of macros with many of the most&nbsp;frequently accessed functions assigned to the function keys on the keyboard. By hitting a F1&ndash;F12 key with or without shift, control, or&nbsp;control+shift, I now have 48 tools easily accessible through my function keys. They provide a template that you can print out, which I laminated (of course!) and taped onto my keyboard above the function keys so I can reference it easily. I use these all the time. The F9 key will cap all selected words; F10 makes them lowercase. And you have 46 other functions, including open, close, small caps, insert em dash, and so on. Many people write their own macros for many of these, but what I like about this is that they are all assigned to the function keys (I am guaranteed to forget a macro 5 minutes later) and the template is an easy reminder that does not take up a lot of real estate on your desk. You can purchase Editor&rsquo;s ToolKit Plus which also includes FileCleaner (and QuarkConverter and NoteStripper) for US $69.95&mdash;a savings of $50.00 if you bought all separately.</span></div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>  <span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:35px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:20px;*margin-top:40px'><a href='http://www.extendoffice.com/product/word-documents-tabs.html' target='_blank'><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/tabs-for-word_orig.jpg" style="margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:1px;padding:3px; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;">&#8203;<a href="http://www.extendoffice.com/product/word-documents-tabs.html"><u style="color:rgb(81, 153, 168)">Tabs for Word</u></a><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&nbsp;</span><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">by ExtendOffice (US $15.00)</span><br /><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">This add-in is not specifically for editing, but it is extremely useful. It adds a tab bar to Word that displays all open documents so that you can quickly jump back and forth between the journal article you are editing and the journal style guide all within a single window without having to close and open different windows. A simple but handy tool.</span></div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>  <span class='imgPusher' style='float:right;height:59px'></span><span style='display: table;width:auto;position:relative;float:right;max-width:100%;;clear:right;margin-top:20px;*margin-top:40px'><a href='http://www.intelligentediting.com/standardversion.aspx' target='_blank'><img src="https://www.kristinethornley.com/uploads/1/2/1/7/121787355/perfectit2_orig.jpg" style="margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 0px; border-width:0; max-width:100%" alt="Picture" class="galleryImageBorder wsite-image" /></a><span style="display: table-caption; caption-side: bottom; font-size: 90%; margin-top: -0px; margin-bottom: 0px; text-align: center;" class="wsite-caption"></span></span> <div class="paragraph" style="text-align:left;display:block;"><strong><font color="#7b8c89" size="4">After Editing</font></strong><br /><a href="http://www.intelligentediting.com/standardversion.aspx"><u style="color:rgb(81, 153, 168)">PerfectIt</u></a><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">&nbsp;</span><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">by Intelligent Editing (US $59.00)</span><br /><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">There are different ways to use PerfectIt. I know some editors like to use it before editing as a sort of first pass. Personally, I use it as the very last step in the copy editing process. The copy editor&rsquo;s mantra is consistency, consistency, consistency. PerfectIt is genius because it finds inconsistent spelling, hyphenation, and capitalization throughout the paper. It has many other functions, including generating a table of abbreviations that are used within the paper. After a final edit, it can also search for comments or edits that have accidentally been left in the paper. And it is completely customizable. I have different style sheets for every journal as well as other general ones for Canadian or American spelling.</span><br /><br /><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">There you have it&mdash;my little army working behind the scenes. Could you just run these programs and add-ins and hand the paper back to your author? Absolutely not! These tools can make your job easier, not make it disappear altogether. A computer program can&rsquo;t replace a good editor because the computer can never understand the author&rsquo;s intention or meaning. My job is safe for another day.</span><br /><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">Is there an add-in or program that you use while editing that you can&rsquo;t live without? Let us know about it.</span><br /><span style="color:rgb(123, 140, 137); font-weight:400">Happy Adventures in Editing!</span></div> <hr style="width:100%;clear:both;visibility:hidden;"></hr>]]></content:encoded></item></channel></rss>